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Special delivery for prosodi! Er, literally.

(I apologize for the atrocious posting hour, but it's the 2nd in my time zone, and I'll be leaving the flat in an hour and staying the night somewhere else without my laptop!)

Title: Wishes and Words to the Wise
For: prosodi
Author: Ask me no questions; I'll tell you no lies.
Characters/Pairings: International Express Delivery Man, Shadwell/Tracy, Aziraphale/Crowley, Newt/Anathema—it's a bit of a large cast, actually, part of which is secret till the end.
Rating: PG-13
Notes: I took the photo included in this story on location exactly where the story cites it. The subject was too bizarre, beautiful, and appropriate not to use somewhere in a GO context.
Summary: Somebody has to deliver the presents in the Universe's grand gift exchange.



He'd had worse lists the week of Christmas, but Maud wasn't going to be happy about it.

The Tadfield address would be easiest, so he'd save that one for last. He always saved the easy ones for last, because he'd learned as a rule of thumb you need all the time you can possibly get for tracking down the odd ones. There were only three entries on his clipboard, and the four packages in his truck were really quite small. He hadn't quite worked out the extra package, as it didn't belong to any of the addressees.

The trouble was mostly that his truck wasn't going to do him any good on the delivery that had to be delivered to "The Ocean Princess, Cabin 999, Middle of the Baltic."

It would, however, do him a spot of a favor on those rough roads in Cornwall.

Resolutely, Frank O'Rourke of International Express (Deliveries LTD) put on his cap, his spectacles, and kissed his sleeping wife goodbye. He left a note on the bed stand that read, "I love you." You could never be too sure, especially about those foreign lorry drivers.

Just to be safe, he'd start off with Cornwall.


* * *



"Get doon hair, wumman!" Shadwell barked, frowning into his thermos. There was nothing worse than cold tea on a cold morning, and that morning's visibility was completely shite. He squinted out the window at the ocean, which was annoyingly calm.

"Now, now, dear," said Madame Tracy, soothingly, flouncing down the stairs in one of those…those abominations that Shadwell had no name for, no matter how many times he asked her. "What's the matter? I'm just tidying up the bedroom."

Shadwell muttered into his thermos, averting his eyes. Had she no shame, not even for the both of them?

"M'tea's cold."

"Oh, poor love," Tracy cooed, flouncing over to pry it out of his hands. "I'll have that fixed up in no time, there's a dear." She paused, squinting out the window.

"Nothin' as would interest ye, lass," Shadwell said, wearily. How in the devil's name was he to keep watch on his woman and his household if there was nothing to watch for? He was sure he'd never heard of a place called Shangri La in bloody Cornwall, but they'd taken care of that by naming the cottage. What he did know about Cornwall was that there were pirates, and where there were pirates, there were witches. His retirement wouldn't be spent in vain after all—or so he'd thought.

On her way to the kitchen, Tracy patted him on the shoulder. "I'm sure they'll be along soon, love," she said, reassuringly, and flounced down the hall.

Shadwell squinted out the window again, still muttering. Truth be told, there were mornings when he thought he'd seen something—a boat off in the mist, the mast of a ship just beyond the horizon—but he'd never quite been able to make it out before it vanished. Sure sign of sorcery, that, he thought darkly. Witches. Pirate witches.

There was a knock at the door of a decidedly unsorcerous nature.

"Wumman, whair are ye? Summat's hammerin' doon the door!"

"Would you mind getting that, love?"

"Yes!" Shadwell shouted, and answered it anyway.

The small, bespectacled man on their doorstep was unremarkable except for his suspiciously pointy cap. He cleared his throat and held up a clipboard with one hand, hefting an oblong box under his other arm that, while not overly large, looked heavy.

"Blustery cold, sir, isn't it, morning by the sea? You'd think they'd have more accurate weather reports by now, wouldn't you, but the radio says one thing and the folks in the post office say another—and nice folks they are at your post office, sir, had to ask them where to find you, as all the cottages hereabouts look similar, that's not to say as you haven't done anything original with the place, because I really can tell you've—"

Vaguely uncomfortable, Shadwell called over his shoulder, "Wumman, I'm givin' ye to th—"

"Very well," said Madame Tracy, hurrying in with a towel in her hands. When she spotted the delivery man—warlock, if Shadwell had anything to say about it—she brightened and put the towel down on the nearest piece of furniture.

"My, you must have caught a chill by now! Come in, come in!"

"That's very kind of you, ma'am," began the delivery man, "but really I just need one of you to sign right here, and then I'll give you your package and be on my way, that's always best, I think, given the time of year and all, busy as it is for every—"

Shadwell grabbed the clipboard, eyeing it suspiciously. That was their address, sure enough, but the name of the recipient was smudged by what looked like water. There were no curious sigils or code anywhere on the page, which he found disappointing.

"Just there, sir," said the delivery man, tapping the blank line under the address.

Shadwell scrawled his signature, which had not changed since the day he learned his letters.

"There, now, that wasn't so hard," said Tracy under her breath.

"Oot o' here, wumman!" Shadwell barked, snatching the box away from the delivery man. It was heavy, and rattled a bit. He hoped it wasn't a bomb. The Witchfinders had had many a nasty incident involving good old-fashioned explosives, which most witches seemed to be quite skilled with. Why couldn't they just use hexes?

The delivery man tipped his hat politely. "Good day, sir. Merry Christmas!"

Shadwell slammed the door in his face and carried the box over to the coffee table. A few flicks of his penknife took care of the heavy tape-job, and the thing inside rolled apart in several dusty, but still functional, pieces. Shadwell rubbed his hands together.

By the time Tracy returned with a fully stocked tea tray, Shadwell had more or less got the theodolite in working order. Just like the Army had had in the old days, he thought, ignoring the enquiry of whether he wanted one lump or two, and focused the telescope lens as he adjusted the angle on the contraption. Perfect. There was still nothing, but it was at least nothing that he could see with perfect accuracy and clarity.

"Mister S, what are you—"

"Nothin' o' yer concern, lass," he said, deciding he ought to thank her for it later. "Two."


* * *



"Did you know," said Crowley, "that most people take cruises in the tropics this time of year?"

"Mm," said Aziraphale, absently, pausing to admire what was left of a medieval wall painting. It looked as if there had once been an entire manger scene, but all that remained was the faint outline of the Christ child in swaddling clothes, round eyes staring.

"That's creepy," Crowley insisted. "Bloody creepy. Remind me why we docked here again?"

"Because it's on the itinerary," Aziraphale said, and grabbed his sleeve. "Wouldn't you just look at this? There's still some blue paint. I'm quite sure it wasn't meant to be that durable. Humans are clever things, aren't they, when you get down to it."

"Took them long enough to learn perspective," muttered Crowley, dismally.

Aziraphale tutted, dragging him along. The church was absolutely lovely, and he wasn't about to let Crowley's dour determination ruin the experience. Warnemunde wasn't a resort town, and neither was Rostock, but they'd paid extra for the bus excursion further inland, and he was going to get their money's worth whether Crowley cared or not.

"I don't know about you, but I'm not going to waste my time on medieval watercolors while there's a big, impressive, interesting Reformation-era clock over there," Crowley said, and pulled free of Aziraphale's grasp only to take hold of his wrist. "Come on."

Aziraphale sighed, but went willingly. At least Crowley was making an effort.

He had to admit that the clock was, in fact, impressive. The woodcarving was spectacularly detailed, and the paint, whether original or not, had been kept in a brilliant state of repair. Tiny civic figures from the community, coats of arms, animals, angels, demons—and, crowning it all, there was a face both familiar and unfamiliar all at once.



"That's creepy, too," said Crowley. "A more interesting kind of creepy, see?"

Someone tugged on Aziraphale's sleeve. Crowley cleared his throat and let go of Aziraphale's other arm, pretending to examine one of the stained glass windows to their right. Aziraphale turned around, somewhat puzzled by the gentleman standing to his left. He was sure he'd seen the chap somewhere, but they hadn't been in Germany for years.

"Delivery for you, sir," said the gentleman, plucking a pen from behind his ear. "All you've got to do is sign here and my work is done. I had no end of a chore finding your whereabouts, to be sure, as the Ocean Princess seems to have docked twice already, and neither my Dutch nor my Danish are what they ought to be, but it seems they got the idea when I asked around here, so nice and organized, these folks, you wouldn't believe—"

Aziraphale shifted uncomfortably from one foot to the other, then took the clipboard and pen. He signed quickly, less legibly than usual, and made note that the name to which the delivery was being made was unclear anyway, and so was the number to which the charges were being made. He had the unshakeable sense he'd done this before.

"Right, then, here you are," said the gentleman, handing a small cardboard box to Aziraphale as he took back the clipboard. "A bit fragile, I think, but nothing broken."

"Thank you," said Aziraphale, and watched him glance uncomfortably up at the clock before tipping his pointed cap and wandering back to the church entrance.

"What on earth is that?" asked Crowley, wandering over to examine the box.

"I don't know," said Aziraphale, taking the opportunity to rid himself of it. "I think it might be yours."

"Well, if it isn't, somebody made the mistake of sending it to me anyway," said Crowley, and undid the tape rather more easily than a creature masquerading as human should be able to. He opened the box and peered inside, brow furrowed.

"Some mistake," he said, pushing it back at Aziraphale. "Must be yours." He wandered back off to stare at the stained glass some more, but Aziraphale noticed his hands were trembling.

The box was full of bubble wrap, but it was clear the bubble wrap was protecting some sort of book. Some sort of very old book. Aziraphale turned it over in his hands, too absorbed to care that he'd dropped the packaging. This copy of the Malleus Maleficarum was ancient indeed, and inside the front cover were written the names of a good many gentlemen, real and imagined, whose names were all too familiar.

Crowley must have paid a fortune for it.

Clearing his throat, Aziraphale tucked the book inside his coat and joined Crowley in front of the stained glass windows. He took hold of the nearest of Crowley's hands he could find, which was difficult, because now his hands were shaking, too, and it wasn't from the combined chill of winter and ancient masonry, either.

"My dear," Aziraphale murmured, squeezing Crowley's fingers till they were still.

Crowley just looked at him: confusion at first, and then a hopeful smile.


* * *



"It's always one bad bulb," Newt sighed, crawling out from under the tree. "Have you got those spares?"

"Knock yourself out," said Anathema, and tossed him the tiny plastic baggie. She sat down in the nearest chair and picked up her Yule issue of the New Aquarian. It was going to be a long, long night, and if Newt could help it, neither of them would sleep.

"I don't understand it," Newt said, poking a hole in the baggie with his index finger and fishing out one of the tiny clear bulbs. "They ought to devise a system whereby one bad light won't affect the entire strand. It's ludicrous. We're living in the modern age, after all."

Anathema nodded, not bothering to look up. She didn't have the heart to tell him that she'd just bought the lights last week, and that she had plugged them in for a test and the entire strand had worked just fine. She had hoped that, after all that bad business at the Air Base (whatever it had been), Newt's technological ineptitude would no longer be more of a hindrance than a help. Sadly, that hadn't turned out to be the case.

"I might as well just pull out ten at random and replace them," he said.

Anathema read the same line a second time and gave up. The story, which put forward several occult and metaphysical theories attempting to explain the high volume of recent Elvis sightings in Iowa, wasn't all that interesting anyway. She put down the magazine.

They'd managed to replace about four bulbs when someone knocked at the door.

"You get it," said Anathema, yanking out another perfectly good bulb.

Reluctantly, Newt got up and opened the door. From across the room, she could see the International Express delivery cap. If the Modern Age ever got a mind to fix the way fairy lights worked, it might as well update certain corporate fashions in the process.

"…so you'd best just sign here," the delivery man was saying, "and I'll be on my way. Best be getting home to Maud—that's my missus—as she's no doubt wondering if I'll even be there for Christmas Eve, and let me tell you, this week's run has taken me from Cornwall to the Baltic coast of Germany to—"

"No kidding," said Newt, hastily, and there was the sound of pen scrawling. "You have a happy holiday," he added, sounding as if he wondered that was the right thing to say. There was an unassuming cardboard box in his hands, and he was holding it as if it might explode. He closed the door on the delivery man hastily and stood there, hesitant.

Anathema snapped the replacement bulb into place and got up, hands on her hips.

"Fireplace?" Newt asked, trying to keep his voice firm.

"Fireplace," said Anathema, decisively.

It wasn't until the cardboard and tissue paper burned away that Anathema noticed the name "Shipton" in the embossing on the ancient leather cover. They managed to pull the book free before too much damage had been done to the interior, and thank goodness.

"At least we have some light," said Newt, rubbing his hands together before the flames.

Anathema just nodded, engrossed in her reading.


* * *



It had been a long week, to be sure, but he'd delivered everything on the list. That still didn't solve the problem of the fourth box, which loomed tiny and somehow ominous in the vast blackness of his truck. Frank took a breath, watched it condense and steam on the air, and started to close the doors. He'd return it to headquarters the day after tomorrow. After all, a late delivery was better than no delivery at all.

A tug on the hem of his coat startled him before he could get the doors shut.

"I think you've got one left in there, sir," said the boy. He was wearing one of those knit caps that had braided ties hanging down from the ears, but his hands were bare and he was in a new, warm-looking jumper. A small mutt with one turned ear sat at his feet, tail wagging expectantly. The boy's smile was all at once innocent and disturbing.

"Yes, young man, I believe I do," said Frank. "But it hasn't got an address, you see, which means I've got to take it back to headquarters and make an enquiry."

"That's funny," said the boy, peering into the truck. "I thought I saw writing on it. It might belong to one of my neighbors. Why don't you check? I could deliver it for you. It's awfully cold, and it's Christmas Eve, after all. You should be at home."

Unexpectedly, Frank found that the young man's suggestion made a lot of sense, so he reached into the shadowy chill of the truck and pulled out the box. It was flatter than the rest, but at least as heavy as the middle two deliveries had been. He checked the label—which hadn't been there before, he was sure of it—and frowned.

"Adam Young," he read. "Tadfield. Do you know Mr. Young?"

"I do, as a matter of fact," said the boy. "I can get that to him in no time."

"Well, bless you, son," said Frank, and handed the boy the box even though some part of him was certain that wasn't how things usually went. "A very Merry Christmas to you, and to Mr. Young, too, you be sure to tell him I said so and that I'm terribly sorry I didn't—"

"Don't worry about it," said the boy, tucking the box snugly under his arm. The dog got up and pranced around its master's feet, yipping impatiently. "Peace on earth, good will towards men an' all that," he said, reaching down to scratch behind the dog's ear.

What an odd young man, and no mistake, Frank thought, and went home, where Maud was making mulled cider and her mother's secret recipe shortbread holiday biscuits.


* * *



He'd have the entire year's worth of New Aquarian back issues read by morning, but he'd save the Yule issue for the next night. After all, it was only proper.

"Just what I wanted," said Adam Young, and burrowed under his covers with a torch.


—end—

Comments

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shadowvalkyrie
Dec. 2nd, 2006 09:08 am (UTC)
The Shadwell/Madame Tracy interactions were my favourite in here. Perfectly in character and somehow very cute. The "pirate witches" made my day! But of course, all the other things were just as lovely. (A/C always are!) Newt's littke problem had me snickering, I only know that thing too well. (Of course the defective bulb is always the last one you try...) Adam was very fitting as well.
wordsincognito
Dec. 5th, 2006 12:40 pm (UTC)
Tracy and Shadwell seem to have stolen the day right from under poor Frank's nose *g* Thank you so much; I'm glad you enjoyed this. Happy Holidays.
amphiptere_ctl
Dec. 2nd, 2006 09:08 am (UTC)
How lovely!
I like so much Frank =) and the gifts
I agree with Crowley about the photo it's creepy but interesting
I'm glad I stayed up late
wordsincognito
Dec. 5th, 2006 12:39 pm (UTC)
If you're ever in Rostock, I recommend looking around that church. There's some really fantastic stuff inside.

Thank you very much for reading. Happy Holidays :)
prosodi
Dec. 2nd, 2006 09:55 am (UTC)
Oh my gosh, I'm so glad I decided to come round at this ungodly hour rather than wait until morning, because, WAH. This is spectacular and warms my little black heart and. Just. Oh gosh, thank you so so much.

The Shadwell/Tracy was totally ace. Witch pirates. And the expectation and the waiting and I'm rambling and not at all coherent with squee, can you tell? There's so much wit and subtlety built into this and its really spectacular. That photo is absolutely amazing by the way. I'm totally going to have to look into that later. Really spectacular. --Did I mention that your characterizations are amazingly well done? Because they are.

Okay, right. I'll go squee to myself now before I make this way way WAY too rambly. Again, thank you so very very much. *g*
wordsincognito
Dec. 5th, 2006 12:38 pm (UTC)
Everybody knows witches and pirates keep company, especially if they've read Blackbeard's Ghost (or, more recently, seen PotC 2)! I have to thank you for your request, because it was the most unique thing I'd seen in a long time - the Delivery Man! Somebody wanted a story about the Delivery Man. I about died; what a cool thing to play around with, and what a challenging one, too.

Thank you, and Happy Holidays :)
melandry
Dec. 2nd, 2006 02:42 pm (UTC)
Very nice! Shadwell and Madame Tracy are hard to write, no doubt, so their spot-on interaction here is a treat.
wordsincognito
Dec. 5th, 2006 12:32 pm (UTC)
Every bit helps their case, I suppose! Thank you so much.
such_heights
Dec. 2nd, 2006 03:34 pm (UTC)
Oh, this is just fabulous! =D
wordsincognito
Dec. 5th, 2006 12:32 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much! Happy Holidays :)
hsavinien
Dec. 2nd, 2006 06:29 pm (UTC)
I can't see the photo. :(
Other than that, very nice. I love Aziraphale's cruise--was the boat planning to stop for ancient church and art viewings before they got on, I wonder?
I agree, Shadwell and Tracy are very well in character, and his accent is spot on. Bad experiences with explosives...heh.
Does poor Mr O'Rourke ever get any *normal* deliveries?
hsavinien
Dec. 4th, 2006 10:52 pm (UTC)
Ooh, now I can see it! Cool!
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use_theforce_em
Dec. 2nd, 2006 11:13 pm (UTC)
Oh, this was precious. And funny. Amazingly funny. Your Shadwell is just spot on, and he's not easy to write. The sense of humor in this felt very close to the book's to me, which made it even more of a joy to read. And the picture was incredible. Crowley being a pain in the butt on their trip was adorable too because you know he would be impossible on a trip like that. XD Oh, and Newt and Anathema were just perfect. With the Christmas lights, far too cute. :)
wordsincognito
Dec. 5th, 2006 12:29 pm (UTC)
Crowley is always a pain in the butt. It's down to his, you know, basic nature.

Re: the photograph, I was standing there in that church staring up at the clock and thinking, whoa, that could not be a better likeness of DEATH. It simply couldn't. So, I snapped the picture in hope that I'd find some kind of use for it later!

I'm glad you enjoyed this so much; thank you!
sanomi
Dec. 3rd, 2006 07:21 pm (UTC)
Absolutely cute. Everyone's voice is distinctive and amazingly in-character! Loved the pirate witches (as did everyone else XD) And Adam giving fabulous gifts to people-- which most of them think are from their significant others-- is just awesome. Loved the A/C interaction, and Crowley just looked at him: confusion at first, and then a hopeful smile. So very adorable!

Shadwell and Madame Tracy were wonderful as well. They are very hard to write for and you portrayed them perfectly!
wordsincognito
Dec. 5th, 2006 12:30 pm (UTC)
I'm glad to see someone comment on the A/C interaction, because I really wanted to show a moment that was...things starting for them. Just the first spark of, um, wow, maybe you're...huh. Love me? Etc. But then, I'm an awful sap like that.

Thank you so very much! I love Shadwell and Tracy a great deal. I couldn't leave them out.
vulgarweed
Dec. 4th, 2006 01:58 am (UTC)
Like so many others, I love the way you wrote Shadwell and Tracy - they can be so cartoonish, and you keep that aspect of them but still show there's a lot more there. Newt and Anathema cracked me up, and Aziraphale and Crowley's section was so beautifully paced, and Adam is just...yes. :D
wordsincognito
Dec. 5th, 2006 12:26 pm (UTC)
I think I had the most fun with their segment, to be honest ;) I think a lot more can be done with them than generally is done, just like I feel more can be done with Agnes. It seems the older characters get the short shrift...although not in the sense of being ageless, because Aziraphale and Crowley don't seem to suffer!

Thank you very much.
waxbean
Dec. 4th, 2006 06:47 am (UTC)
I enjoyed this a lot - I don't think I've ever read too much about the International Delivery Man - I was quite happy to see him again.

wordsincognito
Dec. 5th, 2006 12:25 pm (UTC)
It was part of the request, and I was pleased about that, too :) Thanks.
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wordsincognito
Dec. 5th, 2006 12:24 pm (UTC)
With a bit of cosmic mischief thrown in, I should hope ;)

Thank you kindly.
snarkyperson
Dec. 5th, 2006 01:40 am (UTC)
Your characterization is right on, and I love your Shadwell. I can't tell you the glee I got from the deliveryman's appearance!

My favorite line by far: "There were no curious sigils or code anywhere on the page, which he found disappointing." <3 Shadwell!
wordsincognito
Dec. 5th, 2006 12:24 pm (UTC)
The delivery man was one of the stipulations of prosodi's request, so I was pleased to see him, too!

Thank you very much.
bethbethbeth
Dec. 5th, 2006 02:10 pm (UTC)
Oh, this is lovely! Funny and charming and...I am so pleased to read about so many characters besides Crowley and Aziraphale, since they're so often neglected in GO fic. (and yes, I'm jumping on the "Yay Shadwell!" bandwagon *g*)
(Anonymous)
Dec. 12th, 2006 09:43 am (UTC)
Your icon is cracking me up, I just have to say.

One of my hobbies these days seems to be writing pieces with large and convoluted casts, so I can't help but feel I had this coming *wry grin* I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. Happy Christmas.
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argyleheir
Dec. 7th, 2006 06:21 pm (UTC)
Oh, but this was utterly charming. I love the gifts, and their recepients' reactions -- very warm and soothing all around. It's lovely that Aziraphale and Crowley are at home even when they're not home.

And witch pirates! *glee*
wordsincognito
Oct. 8th, 2007 04:31 pm (UTC)
I'm forever finding the Comments That Got Away (TM). As ever, thanks, Argyle!
penknife
Dec. 13th, 2006 02:17 pm (UTC)
Aww! This is funny and charming.
wordsincognito
Oct. 8th, 2007 04:30 pm (UTC)
Thank you :) Whew; now that the reveal's up, I don't have to remember to login as my now-not-so-secret ID. I swear I nearly blew my cover a few time answering other comments, and only remembered at the last minute. Then again, I used that ID last year and forgot what it was, but it's entirely possible others remembered anyway.
dragon_moon
Jan. 6th, 2007 05:19 pm (UTC)
*happy sigh* All of the segments were just perfect. So sweet, really, of Adam to think of giving everyone gifts. That is a beautiful photo! Thank you so much for sharing. ^___^
wordsincognito
Oct. 8th, 2007 04:29 pm (UTC)
The photo was taken in (if I remember correctly) St. Mary's Church (I forget the German name). It's the most striking depiction of Death I've seen in a long time, and it made me think of GO so much it wasn't even funny. Thanks, and Happy New Year!
queeniefox
Jan. 6th, 2007 09:55 pm (UTC)
I do love things with lots of characters in their own little scenes like this - I'm glad someone requested the Delivery Man! That photo is rather terrifying, but compelling.
wordsincognito
Oct. 8th, 2007 04:29 pm (UTC)
I'm glad someone did, too - when I got the assignment, I was pretty amazed. I don't think I've ever heard anyone say, gee, I wish the Delivery Man showed up in more fic! He's a great character.

I keep meaning to print the photo. I'm very fond of it, in all its creepiness. Thanks :)
saraswathi_rani
Jan. 7th, 2007 01:35 am (UTC)
Your Shadwell and Madame Tracy are so spot on. *squees* The other characterizations are brilliant as always, of course, but the first scene was my favorite- I always had a soft spot for old couples that are so comfortable like they are. I loved the scene with Crowley and Aziraphale, too- skulking in a corner and pretending that he has nothing to do with whatever Aziraphale is receiving is just so Crowley. Wow. In general, love all around. Thanks for writing this! <3
wordsincognito
Oct. 8th, 2007 04:28 pm (UTC)
I enjoyed writing their bit the most, I think. Shadwell's POV can't help but be fun; he's the best kind of unreliable narrator you could ask for (a mostly harmless one, that is). Adam was the moving force behind the mysterious exchange of all their possessions, of course, but even if Crowley can take the appearance of having been behind it by pretending he didn't in the first place...well, that's pure Crowley ;) I'm glad you enjoyed reading; Happy New Year!
refche
Jan. 10th, 2007 09:57 pm (UTC)
This made me feel much too warm considering the holidays are over. :) I loved the characterization, Shadwell is always fun to read, but I adore your Anathema voice. Yay Elvis sightings! The delivery man was a great read, especially his dedication. And the short bit with Adam was amazing, in a uniquely Adam-creepy way that manages to always make me happy.

The whole fic made me feel incredibly content. *hearts*
wordsincognito
Oct. 8th, 2007 04:28 pm (UTC)
Thanks, Ref :) The delivery man's dedication is dead obvious in the book, so I can't take credit for it! As for Adam, I suspect he'll eventually get his own subscription to that magazine as soon as he's out of the house and doesn't have his parents nosing into what he uses his pocket change/allowance for...
acciochocolate
Jan. 12th, 2007 06:16 pm (UTC)
re: Wishes and Words to the Wise
Very cute and lovely, in a wonderful sort of way. :) So, the International Express Delivery Man is acting as Santa Claus? That's good! You've got everyone down pat, I must say. Good work! :)
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shinzuku
Sep. 20th, 2007 04:39 am (UTC)
(He took hold of the nearest of Crowley's hands he could find, which was difficult, because now his hands were shaking, too, and it wasn't from the combined chill of winter and ancient masonry, either.

"My dear," Aziraphale murmured, squeezing Crowley's fingers till they were still.

Crowley just looked at him: confusion at first, and then a hopeful smile.)

That's really nice.
wordsincognito
Oct. 8th, 2007 04:27 pm (UTC)
Many thanks for the lovely feedback! Also, the photograph link that's broken is now fixed. It does make a difference to the narrative, and I'm sorry you didn't get to see it the first time around!
miss_morland
Jan. 29th, 2009 02:27 pm (UTC)
Whee! I just found this after having sifted through the comm, and I'm SO glad I did - finally a fic that combines my three favourite pairings! Shadwell and Madame Tracy were just plain fantastic, and the A/C moment made my heart melt. And of course Newt will mess up the lights. *giggles*

Wonderful!
irisbleufic
Jan. 29th, 2009 05:25 pm (UTC)
Thank you, m'dear! Loved writing this one :)
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