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Happy Holidays, Circeniko!

Title: Apple
Gift Recipient: Circeniko
Author: somewhatdeluded
Rating: R
Summary & Pairing: Normal boys don't give presents at their own weddings. Unfortunately for Aziraphale and Crowley, Adam Young has never been a normal boy. (Crowley/Aziraphale, implied Adam/Pepper)
Author's Notes: Very big thanks to C. and E., my real-life betas, who Do Not ReadTM m/m slash, and yet very sweetly read and re-read this until the last of my creative punctuation had headed for the hills. Any remaining errors are all mine.

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gottalet_itburn
Mar. 17th, 2006 04:24 am (UTC)
This was...amazing. I'm..sort of speechless at its amazingness, which I don't think is a word, but hopefully you get my drift.

"..Crowley was still slumped drunkenly against the arm of his sofa, trying to pretend that the wetness on his face was just sweat, instead of hurt and angry tears."

AWWWWW *dies from crying Crowley*

This was really, truly wonderful. Funny and tender and sexy *stops trying to articulate and rereads*

blindswandive
Oct. 12th, 2007 05:42 pm (UTC)
Gorgeous. Fabulous. Thank you for a wonderful read!
somewhatdeluded
Oct. 24th, 2007 04:55 am (UTC)
\o/ Thank you so much! :D
sticktothestory
Nov. 21st, 2007 06:44 pm (UTC)
This was magnificent. I'm so happy I came across it. Thanks for sharing.
somewhatdeluded
Nov. 22nd, 2007 04:04 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much!
shanaqui
Jan. 29th, 2008 10:54 am (UTC)
I read this ages ago, but it's only now I'm going round and trying to comment on a load of fics I love. So, uh, sorry for being very belated? But I love this to death and I must've recced it a gazillion times. The sex scene is so well written -- just enough detail to be hot and pretty, but stopping short of gratuitous porn (not that porn isn't good in its place).

And I really, really love this bit:
"Don't laugh at me, you twat. That bloody well is what you gave me, and you gave Aziraphale a fucking libido, and I - I - well, I don't think that's half fair. I've always enjoyed my libido. In fact, I enjoy it so much I've now managed to prove that I'm easy even for a being of Hell, since I don't think any of my fellows has ever been buggered by an angel on the back table of a bookshop, under the watchful eye of wall-to-wall shelves of horrified Bibles."
thorneblackburn
Sep. 6th, 2008 03:37 am (UTC)
and it was then that the reader realized what Adam had given them. What he had given them was perspective.
eleish
Sep. 25th, 2008 12:28 pm (UTC)
This story is funny, and cute and totally believable. Thank you, I enjoyed it very much.
audreytiphaine
Jan. 14th, 2009 12:34 am (UTC)
just read this tonight, and it's the last fic i'm reading before bed, and it gosh, but it was freaking beautiful! thank your for writing and letting the rest of us kids read... i loved it.
eye_ofthe_liger
Jun. 26th, 2009 02:53 am (UTC)
YAY ADAM. And I LOVED this line:


It was just that he'd thought there was more to it than that, and try as he might, undignified as it might be, he just couldn't quite reconcile that a being of pure goodness and light, with whom he happened to be quite seriously in love, had just used him as a meaningless fuck. Not even the irony was comforting.
hekateras
Jul. 31st, 2012 08:34 pm (UTC)
I can't quite get over the utter, utter scary creepiness of Adam doing something like that to them without warning or consent, even if it was "just the slightest push". Although I can't strictly say that it's out of character for him, either. Even someone who admonished others for 'messing people about' could be a hypocrite, though one would hope that he'd have grown up better than that. Where's the free will?

Other than that, it was pretty much wonderful. They sounded very in-character and Crowley's closed-up reaction to Aziraphale talking about Lust was just perfectly him, our vulnerable Crowley.

But yeah, scary, scary Adam.
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